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Under the Mountain
Underdark metaphor and connections, which sort of goes over to a WordPress blog.
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I've actually been working on this off and on. After proof reading the first chapter a little I've decided to uploaded it to here. Hope you guys enjoy it.
Edited heavily for grammar and spelling. Chapter 2 soon on its way
Edited heavily for grammar and spelling. Chapter 2 soon on its way
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I enjoyed the story, it had a nice progression to it.
However, you have to work on your homonym (sound alike word) errors. Example: Using there, when you need they're. These aren't caught by spell check because the words are spelled right, they're just not used right.
Good luck on your next story! Take your time and progress both in creativity and technique.
However, you have to work on your homonym (sound alike word) errors. Example: Using there, when you need they're. These aren't caught by spell check because the words are spelled right, they're just not used right.
Good luck on your next story! Take your time and progress both in creativity and technique.